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I enjoy the concept but the writing makes it a bit of a chore to read.It's so heavily padded with circular purple prose that sometimes seems to get into a endless loop of describing how beautiful MC is and how humble, psychotic MLs ears are turning red.When the story does manage to get past that it's interesting, though sometimes a bit off putting.Spoiler
Example would be cuddling and hugging ML who, at the time, is literally a skinless flesh monster drenching everything in blood.
[collapse]MC is aloof but not so aloof as to make you think he's playing with ML.ML has very low self esteem and is consequently super dependent and submissive. I am hoping this is something that changes over time but the title of this novel concerns me.Rest of the people in the worlds seem to all, without exception, have single digit IQs and the vapid personalities to go with it.
