Rescuing the Humble and Paranoid Male Supporting Character [Quick Transmigration] Chapter 103 Discussion

Wasn't sure what to think when people said they had trouble reading through parts. And in the end I think there's two reasons, especially the first arc. One is that it reads like edited mtl--understandable and appreciated with the occasional gender mixup or odd turn of phrase--and the other is that Spoiler

the ml, one personality is referred to as he, the other as 'she', but then 'she' changes to 'he' and then there's not always quotations. As well as the fact that while I'm sure in Chinese the names are visually different even if they look the same, straight translation to English makes the names identical and therefore rather hard to tell who is doing what.

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So far, I like it. Edit 7/4/24 -- I still like it, but I'm dropping for now. Spoiler

The fact that the ML is multiple characters in each world is definitely interesting, and the MC certainly doesn't mind, but it's getting tiresome to me. Especially since as of the arc I'm on now, in the previous arc, the two parts were merged together, and even the MC expected it would be just one ML in the next world. I'm sure there's an overarching plot reason, which is why I'll come back to it, but at the moment I don't want to read any more.

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