- #1
Frankly, there's too much superfluous dialogue and descriptions, and the way the protagonist acts and reacts in situations feels unnatural for someone who's supposed to have been a battle-hardened knight in their past life. I'd expect a more calm and composed attitude, but instead his reactions are too exaggerated.The combat so far is also rough, and it suffers from the aforementioned problem of superfluous dialogue, with it being interjected into a fight between two people trying to kill each other despite neither character having the leisure to do so.I don't have much expectations that things will get better, so I'm dropping it here. I'd only suggest reading it if you're in desperate need a time killer.