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uke isn't attractive character for me. I was okay reading this with hope there's some character development, there won't be any.
1. Uke can't stand up for himself when seme literally said they are couple. And when everyone at school & his older brother jealous over uke because uke has handsome boyfriend, he just s*upidly stand there accepting everything. It even happen to the end. When classmate blatantly asked uke to break up with seme even tho they both already mated, uke just kept silent until seme came and told everyone they both mated and uke is pregnant. Like, wtf, use your own mouth to say something.
2. He clumsily tried to lie to seme. I understand why he said he forgot his memories, but come on. Be consistent. Put better effort. He tried to honey trapped seme but in the end he was swept up and instead he was begging for s*x. For real??
3. Yes he is been manipulated by seme it's true. But seme technically never lied to him no? Uke got scared seme is an assassin so he came up with idea that seme is a gangster. He never even consider asking seme real truth. When seme asked him do you really think I m a gangster? Uke just asked back, you're not?
4. Author put useless story here and there. Like when seme manipulated uke that apartment is the safest place so uke wouldn't run away. But at the same time, uke family + older brother texted uke to run away from seme. The misunderstanding won't happen if he just ask what is seme job
5. Uke is already half imprinted since he was a kid when he saved seme. Seme tried to hid the fact that seme family tried to kill uke every single day just so seme could cut their engraving. While seme trying to get uke pregnant. If omega is pregnant his imprint will be completed, which mean even if uke died, seme can't marry or have another kid with other omega. Uke get pregnant is the only way to save his life. But seme withhold such crucial information about uke life only to put mud in the water making misunderstanding and confusion.
6. Seme never bother tell uke his real job, so uke is gullible enough to be fooled by seme enemy.
7. Uke has to be saved. Many. Many times. By seme. When he was kidnapped, when he was sold, when being bullied. Typical burden.
This is all useless plot. Even if author make seme told uke about his job, uke is in danger to be killed by seme family, seme previous mission, seme fake fiance, etc. There are still a lot of plot. Plot with gangster enemy, plot with seme family, plot with people who are jealous and bully, plot with loan shark. There are plots even if author didn't add dumb misunderstandings here and there. It actually infuriating me when I finished the novel and realize, seme is in love alone. Uke didn't actually 'love' him. Uke is kinda, swept by seme and yeah I m pregnant, so I have to be with him yadayada.
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