Traveling Through Ancient Times To Be a Shopkeeper Chapter 67 dropped Discussion

  • Thread starter Goblin1000
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I got tired after 67 chapters, so I am dropping it...

The writing is weak; there are lots of names introduced and thrown at us at the same time. Most of the time, I kept wondering who the hell this character is.

The MC falling in love with ML was out of nowhere with no developement. He claimed he was straight and had a girlfriend in the past life, but because he saw ML once, he fell in love with him and had no problem touching him and sleeping with him. He didn't question himself or find it weird how he fell in love with a man after claiming he is straight.

The business stuff is extremely boring, and the author likes to fill inventions all over the place for the MC. Instead of creating a few recipes at a time, let's fill a hundred in one go. Instead of creating something, let's create sauce, soap, plastic, dried seafood, candles at the same time. He keeps adding stuff and makes me feel it's all meaningless, like the author keeps adding just to fill a grocery list.
 
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