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The general story is ok, well I didn't finish it so I don't know if the secret plot will make sense... The details were less credible. The author created intelligent and powerfull characters but they don't really investigate, just wait for the disaster to happen, then wait again. Then they think about complicated conspiracy theories and wait again.What disappointed me the most is that the MC is supposed to be a refiner, so he makes some artifacts on the first chapters and then nothing. The author promised us that he'll tinker with mecha, but no, the refining stops really early on.Then we have the description of the world where the MC transmigrates and it's subpar. No other word. I'm near the end and I don't even know if there are skyscrapers of forests on it. It was as vague as the description of the interstellar period. All descriptions are nonexistent, the worlds, the technology, the culture, the food, even the face of people (well some have hair or eye color)... And please explain to me how they can survive in space without a suit of some kind? So the author unfold the story but never set the stage nor sweat the details.I'll stop the criticism at the MC and ML, but I could write way more...So MC is indifferent, like said in the summary. He's the wait and see character, he's OP and doesn't care about anything. Of course, he doesn't communicate, he just smiles. He thinks the ML is a cute child and takes advantage of him while drunk. Kinda disgusting, yes.The ML is cold and doesn't communicate either. When ML speaks to him, he never answers and turns his head or his eyes... Sooo annoying!! But at least his personnality is better developped. The author does explain his thoughts, his needs and his doubts. A pity only the ML has a shape and everything else is up to your imagination.