- #1
Like some people said, the mpreg was a strange thing to add. I'd say it didn't have much impact on the story and would be the same if the main couple had just adopted again. I felt uncomfortable reading it since there's no real explanation aside from Jaing Mochen being the MC in a novel.
Here's a warning and spoiler about the mpreg:
Yuan Mingxu gets pregnant as well but miscarries. He was ab*sed by Zhao Yixing and it also suggests that YMX was r*ped. I can't remember the chaps and I'm too uncomfortable to look for it but it's definitely a part you can skip.
The ending also felt a bit rushed? Yan Qingchi 100% deserved the best male actor award considering how the roles he's played have very different vibes (jumping from an idol story to a military story then a martial arts) but having them announce their relationship then in like 2 chapters announce their wedding was very off-putting.
[collapse]Pros:SpoilerThe amount of trust between Jiang Mochen and Yan Qingchi is raising the bars. JMC has done a bg check on YQC before meeting and can immediately notice that there's a stark contrast between the YQC he's seen in reports and the YQC he's met. Luckily that's around mid to late parts of the story so by the point he's suspicious/curious, he has complete trust in YQC.
YQC also has a lot of trust in JMC. There's a part where YMX (JMC's "white moonlight") is trying to insinuate that JMC likes him (YMX) more than YQC (legal spouse) but completely fails. Even when YQC finds out that JMC met w/YMX privately (just to tell YMX to stop harrassing them but YQC doesn't know) he's more upset that JMC didn't tell him that he was going to see YMX.
On the topic of YMX-
He doesn't last for more than 30 to 45 chapters. He's really a minor villain that's jumping like a clown. Same thing w/ZYX.
I also like how they raised QiQi and YanYan. Although they don't have much time in the story, you can tell how much YQC and JMC try to be part of their children's lives. When they're separates during holidays, one side wil bring the kids to the other parent to celebrate. For New Years and birthdays.
There's also YQC's past life. It's sprinkled around enough and coherant enough for you to understand why he's so talented. He's an orphan adopted by a rich family and gets along with them very well even after his younger brother was born. His mother liked playing the piano so he learned how to play for her. He had a bad time once in the orphanage and developed a habit to record things so he wouldn't be wronged. He's skilled at hand to hand combat for self defense purposes.
And I just got started on the extras. 100% recommend to read. The second extra is making me green with envy at just how adorable their family is.
[collapse]All in all, a nice story to read for fun. Don't think too hard but don't be too brainless. Just let the fluff rot your teeth.