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I know I am only short dozens of chapters before completing the main story, but I couldn't take it anymore.The story was very good in beginning, but it became very flat. Especially after mpreg was introduced. There was something missing in the story. It was fluffy but lack genuine warmth.I am not going to spoil anything in details, but I feel like the MC is packaged to be too good in everyway. His weakness is only one thing. The novel feels a bit pretentious.Some parts are written in too much details, while some is skimmed way too quick. Transition in some places is a bit choppy.I really liked another the novel by the Author. I rated that novel 4.5. I had some hoped for this one so I presevered until this far.I hope I am not too harsh. This novel has its merit. I actually love the ML. He is trully a man of his word. He abides by his principles and trully a respectable person. He is one of my fave ML so far.