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the MC is okay but I want him to be more assertive or some with brains that really manipulates the hero not only the goddess
[collapse]I believe that the hero's personality is supposed to piss the reader but almost every woman that comes in contact with him become s*upid I enjoy the multiple pov but it becomes padding at this point (I don't care about the princess and the hero's idiotic lovers pov but it nourishes my hate and annoyance for them) I recommend to read this by months.