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well tbh, for me the MC getting it together with the moon oracle isn't done right
when her pov came what I felt was that the MC was just an option, cause of her failed first love that's never gonna pan out, she came stumbling upon the side route which is the MC, the product produced using the process of elimination
her not really liking Sakurai? (that's BS, cause I remember the times when Sakurai visits her.. their atmosphere there is something)
also the way the MC got together with her really wasn't done well, the transition wasn't done well, cause in the earlier chaps, the MC still thinks of her as sakurai's gf, so he's not really thinking about her, then he for some reason after a couple of chaps, forgets about that issue
well for some, her transformation might come as good, cause it's a thing that isn't touch upon that much, but being refreshing doesn't mean it's automatically gonna be good, especially if it's not done right
what the author had done is just adding some unnecessary drama, he should have stuck with his original plan, with her being the first heroine
heh wasn't really surprised when the author reinforces her appeal as a good heroine material... psh not really gonna buy those things, look at Lucy and Aya saying that they would never fall in love with someone else, then look at this one, who's to say that he she wouldn't change sides again if Sakurai for some reason pursues her
if there's a chance that a girl will look at someone else, then they ain't really worth it, might come as innocent but it has a chance to be a precursor to being ntr'd, what if the one they checks out pursues and seduces her, heh
sigh if your ok with their "romance" then good for you, cause I envy you for having that view (heh my view is a bit biased with my experiences and stuff)
[collapse]oldsigh be prepared in reading this novelit's a novel teeming with b*tches if a character is a b*tch, chances are that character is relevant it's might just be a sad way to project some character development though tbh looking back, and it might sound contradicting, but I like how some of them came around so even though I rant about this, I really enjoyed reading thisSpoilerwell I liked how the destiny goddess came around
for others though, can't really say I liked it but hell, each to their own, you might like how the others came around and I can understand that
[collapse]oldwell been rereading after piling some chaps and I have to say to make some character development for the heroines it's full of let's make the heroine a bit*h first then mellow her out to be part of the harem latersigh knowing what's about to happen and seeing them being bit*h gives me mixed feelings about them... just sigh damn I'm irritated oldThat moon oracle should just die and be gone for good already.. It's really getting irritating if you ask me.. skimming parts related to her.. why is the author still including that b*tch thereit's like you're taking care of someone's girlfriend cause for some reason the boyfriend can't be with her and you always hear her talk about that guy.. why the hell would you take care of someone's girlfriend.. and when the girls that are in love with you are finally making a move and then some (taking your v card) that son of a b*tch is gonna c*ckblock you... but when the boyfriend visits her, your girls will make sure to not get in the way