- #1
Not a bad story. The start is fun and seeing the main character grow is interesting. His affiliation is interesting with the direction he goes. I like the relationships he has with the gods and heroes. They show great personal relationships between them.Now for the bad. I am unsure why so many people try writing multiple romantic relationships with the MC. Makes the MC seem like a oblivious scumbag and the girls going along with it seem brainwashed and cultlike. I personally think that people should be written believable instead of what we see here. Things need to be resolved through death and loss not mutual acceptance between the girls. It doesn't allow anybody to grow and makes the story stagnant. It is war so some of them should die or introduce more men. The current state is unsalvageable as the girls have become the MC cult at this point. I am unsure why people try to pull off the heram thing, I can only think of it working with a villain to be honest. The MC is not a villain leading these girls on.If you don't care about bad relationship writing than this is a great story with good paceing. The MC has great magical growth (personal growth lacking) that shows a good story filled with political drama with the upcoming battle with a demon lord. Overall that is a great classic. Just needs a bit of relationship fixing.
