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the MC just basically cannot go further than a kiss, always being interrupted by something, which gets a little bland after the first few times. But since this isn't a smut WN, it's nothing that affects the enjoyment of the story too much
[collapse]. But he is aware of the feelings of his harem, just feels conflicted about it.The fights are well thought out enough that it makes the MC doesn't feel too overpowered, and instead he has to actually use his brains (and oftentimes have to sacrifice something) in order to win. If there is one criticism is that Spoilerlater on when the MC is broken he can just sacrifice his lifespan in exchange for powerful cheats, but it still had the limitation of him literally dying sooner.
[collapse]There are actually a few plot points that goes somewhat unexplained, but they are mostly early on, and since the series hasn't ended yet, we still aren't sure what the author is planning on doing with them, mainly Spoilerthe goddesses are established to be shady and aren't 100% good, so we still don't know if the MC will turn to evil or not, but for now he seems to be treading on the path of good and exclusively that. And not to mention the goddess wants to free her siblings, but from where the story is heading + the author's approximate timeline I don't feel like we'd have time for that.
[collapse]Overall the early parts can be a little rough, but the more you get into it the more captivating the world becomes and the story feels more comprehensive. You follow a super weak guy at the beginning and by the end he gets strong, but the journey to get there feels natural, and you can't help but read further to see just what will he do next, or what the world will become, or where the story will head. That, to me, is a mark of a great piece of writing. To captivate the reader even if it's not perfect.