- #1
It’s not bad, just boring. Based on the summary and the tags, I was expecting the novel to take the comedic approach but it’s like the author isn’t good at writing. Right as things look like they’re going to be funny, the situation gets resolved in a very unfufilling manner.Spoiler
Also, I’m not sure what the role of the ogFL is. There’s some serious foreshadowing in the first few chapters that she’s aware of the original trajectory and will probably cause problems for MC only for her to be thrown into jail?? And at chapter 40 even FL has forgotten about her which doesn’t fit her character as someone who’s convinced ML is in love with ogFL.
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