- #1
its a nice concept but I don't like the execution the rules of the mind reading is incredibly vague even when she is right next to him he only hears her thoughts sometimes and conveniently hears nothing about the world being a novel and that she isn't the original owner of the body and overall it seems like he can only hear her thoughts when the author feels it would help the plot go in the direction they want also the ML is just kind of a as*hole when he is right next to her which means he should be able to read her mind he should be able to tell that she clearly doesn't want to do something yet he still pushes her to do it so either his mind reading is so f*cking shitty he can only hear her thoughts once every blue moon or he is a as*hole who directly ignores her opinions just to have things go the way he wants if I were the FL I would have probably punched him by now consequences be dammed