- #1
Firstly the story is pretty s*upid and lame. Seeing a bunch of reviews I decided to finally add my own. This story is only for reading when waiting for an update. Lots of potential is instantly shat on by the author in the same chapter. Foremost example he is a vampire... immune to the sun and without weakness why the f*ck even bother then? Now lets go on a limb and say a vampire not in the cliche sense but just the literal parasite kind... NOT EVEN THAT he don't require things from others and can get by on normal food. He is literally not a vampire in any context. He is a pe*vert. He is not smart at all and just forces through problems. He never has any problems. His life is never in danger so no tension ever. The potential of the cat is never made use of in a interesting way. He is a thirsty pe*vert. The best parts when reading this are the tn/ed notes/comments. Too many skippable parts of no noteworthy note in any possible conceivable fashion (eg. sounds or useless over extended rambling) Overall not the worst thing you can see on NU not by a long shot. It is an alright read. I recommend giving it a go if you are bored, taking a poop in the bathroom, waiting in line and so on that kind of thing