The Spearmaster and the Black Cat Chapter 12 Discussion

The story would probably be good, but the translation is horrible. I don't know how people can critique a story when you can't read half of what's written. I'm not nitpicking, I have read better translations from Google translate (and we know how bad those are). Here are a couple examples that I copied and pasted:

Raguren-san begins heartily swinging his broadaxe into the tree, chopping it grandly. Something about the blows being strong, enough to say blow three times with only two other words.

As the big tree is chopped in no time, is this a ? I stared unintentionally.

With the returned clothes I received, I return back to the hut with the leather clothes and fabric. In order to put away the things, I was holding on the lined up shelves I went to the shelves.

There’s various shelves, but a small wood chip gets into my eye.

Is the stick of the tree? This, must be what it is.

These aren't the worst ones either.