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The Novel started really good.It had good world building, a nice lore and a good premise. The characters were all interesting like for example Achilles or the cat. The MC seemed to be interesting. No beta or edgy guy at least. And the training in the mountain arc was fun as well.It wasn't outstanding but at least decent. The only thing that bugged me were the unnecessary long and detailed explanations. Chapter long description of how a cave, a house or some random person looks like also the writing can be monotonous and a little distant at times.But it all becomes worse the moment the MC meets humans. No more fleshed out characters, no lore and no interesting MC. Somehow the MCs charcter is reduced to being a strong pe*vert, other men are just evil villians and women are just big breasts, which the MC likes to grope quite forcefully.Quite sad as this had potential. I don't know why this is happening so often with novels. After showing that the autor can be a good writer they always screw it up on purpose like they did here.Good job for wasting your work!