The Spearmaster and the Black Cat Chapter 250 Discussion

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the story is interesting and the characters and the universe are well fleshed out, not too grim, not too silly

the MC is basically an immortal badass going around without fear, but at the very start of the serie he is so weak that he almost die a couple time and survive by luck, only after meeting his spearmaster mentor does he become overpowered

if you like complex world building, this is for you

as the serie goes on, the author spend a LOT of time fleshing out the world, constantly introducing new organisations, new dimensions, new people, each unique and interesting in their own way

... and that's why I stopped reading it...

for me, the author spend TOO MUCH TIME introducing stuff constantly, and doing NOTHING with it!

who cares about the names of the 13 most powerful groups from two countries over if you are NOT going to interact with them in the next 100 chapters? why do you need to spend and entire chapter describing in painfully elaborated details all the powers of the dozens of new artefacts and gears the team acquired if you are not going to fight with them for a few dozens chapters? also stop throwing names at us if we have no concept of what they mean!

normal stories introduce places and people and abilities when you encounter them or start using them, not dump them all on you at the start and hope you remember them when we finally see them for the first time, 50 chapters later!

the story is good! the fights are good! the constant painfully long dumps of expositions are HEAVY and BORING!

at first I could ignore that, but now I'm done, I quit, it's getting worse over time
 
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