- #1
This novel was an absolute mess.The writer corrected a lot of chapters, sometimes more than once, because it was riddled with potholes.You might have read 20 chapters and then suddenly realise that something is off, only to notice that the writer changes major plot points and settings and now you have to re-read it or it’ll make even less sense.The novel finished in 2020, and even in 2023, she was still correcting/changing things three years after the end.And there are still holes.Female characters are so bad that even the Chinese comments called her out for it.“Puzzles” & “Mysteries” all make zero sense, characters come to conclusions no one could have reached with the available information, it’s the writer’s knowledge mistake, she knows the answer because it’s her story and forgets that the characters don’t have said knowledge.The grand plot collapses halfway through and instantly focuses on the romance that is completely out of place at that moment.I can’t remember much else because it has been three years and I got tired of having to re-read this cluster-f*.If you really want to read it, buy it on the original site or you won’t understand a thing due to other sites not necessarily having the most up-to-date version, and lower your expectations to the very bottom.
