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the MC is older than her age and become the president of their company since his brother died right, the thing is that I see that she wants to be with ML and all but like they were still in highschool or something based on the MTL and maybe its just the conservative bone in my body but the way I interpret MC's action I find it a bit naive per se?
- I know they were never get caught but like staying in a house without anyone in there. One her parents didn't even meet ML only her brother and like what would happen if they did get caught by parents. The
ML's image in the MC's parents eyes will probably collapse *the conservative bones in my body is screaming
- I know they were never get caught but like staying in a house without anyone in there. One her parents didn't even meet ML only her brother and like what would happen if they did get caught by parents. The
- I felt like ML leaving that place will be good for his development but no MC can't afford him to go away. In my head its like why why *probably one of the reasons why im a reader instead of a writer
Like she don't care about ML being poor and basically have nothing which causes his insecurities I have nothing to say about that but bruuu I know that other than telling him u dont mind that let him try to do his best to be the best for you.
ML did get rich in the end and that's good but that's because the author made it so. Its even a plot hole like how did he even become rich.
I was nearing the end but I cant help but thought that the MC hindered the ML in some ways.
[collapse]Things I like in this story Spoiler- How the ML tried to spend his hard earned money just to buy her the moon bracelet. Thats cool.
- Another is how ML basically tried to be a better man since MC's pursuer were all rich kids basically one of the sources of his insecurities but MC is there to assure him.
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- Another is how ML basically tried to be a better man since MC's pursuer were all rich kids basically one of the sources of his insecurities but MC is there to assure him.