- #1
So the first, most obvious, problem with this story is that it is very wordy. The chapters are longer than they need to be probably and a lot of the time it feels like the translator didn't quite understand what he was translating but just sort of went "eh, f*ck it" and uploaded anyways. I'm not complaining about free translations - just warning that sometimes things are sort of incomprehensible in a way that feels like its because the translator didn't understand it anymore while translating than you do while reading.The second BIG problem can be summed up like this. In chapter 1 the MC is 5 years old, in chapter 45 he's 6 (or maybe 7?) while his sister who follows him around is 1 year younger. MC kind of gets a pass because of reincarnation but all the female leads are just normal 5/6/7-year-olds. The author handwaves it by saying that they're "geniuses" but... no. That isn't enough of an explanation at all as anyone who has ever been around a five-year-old can tell you. It doesn't offend me or anything but it's just so s*upid to have all the main characters under 10 years old. Plus it hits all the typical isekai story beats like they aren't all toddlers (girls get kidnapped and beaten up by grown men, girls 'love' MC, girls have heroic determination to do things other than nap time...) basically it's really s*upid if you ever stop to think about it for like half a second.There's also a lot of nonsensical plot elements (MC is abandoned at 5 because he has no skills even though he's like a literal god with a sword and makes zero attempt to hide that fact) but eh, it's isekai it gets a pass from me in that department. It's actually pretty okay in the generic isekai sense and the MC is a lot better than other similar MCs because of his mentality. Just try to never remember that the whole cast is barely out of diapers.
