Ex Strongest Swordsman Longs For Magic In Different World Chapter 6 Discussion

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The world renowned strongest swordsman managed to beat the Dragon God in exchange for his life. In exchange for beating him, the dragon sees him worthy of a wish.

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Wow that's pretty interesting. The wish part felt forced though but that's irrelevant already cause it's just a reason he reincarnated. Right?

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He has no parents, friends, lovers. Anyone related basically.

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Damn, that's so sad.

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In his new life, he has a family. He got shunned (subtly) after his family found he has no (more) potential for growth. He shrugs it off like nothing happened cuz he was "interested" in magic.

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Wow that's unrealistic.

Those are my thoughts 6 chapters in. The MC has no character other than being interested in magic and being real good with the sword.

The writing style is as the other reviews (and comments in the site) say: horrible. This novel isn't meant to read, it's meant to be skimmed through. You won't miss anything other than our MC's muscle pains or something.

It's a pretty nice time killer though, so 2/5.

Edit: As of c28, I'm smelling some plot! But it's still bad for grammar freaks, so much pointless conversations and things.

The author is really terrible at foreshadowing too, if that's what it's called.