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So I've read the LN so I decided to look at the Wn and unsurprisingly I see a low rating, well its not really surprising for a wn here to be rated 3-4 stars as it is just basically a draft for the story itself and things always improve for the LN (cuz you have your editors, proofreaders etc.) But damn. It hasn't changed all that much its still kinda a jumbled mess, sure the author fixed some of its vagueness in the wn but the one thing I find unbearable is the nonsensical way if putting magic/ skills likeSword Theory. God Slayer. Dragon Slayer. The Dragon’s Divine Protection. Assured Slash. Ability of Discernment: Individual Style. Copycat. Iron-Cutting Sword.what the hell. This is absolutely horrible I can't make heads or tails on what the other stuff is for like I get some of it but can't you simply put the skill you'll be using rather than adding some nonsensical stuff? Honestly it raised a lot of flags for me but I pushed through and I found an another issue which is no one seems to suspect him doing all sorts of crazy stuff despite being so called 'skilless' well his teacher is a bit suspicious but man couldn't they have tried a but harder? Make an effort to investigate or something but everyone just accepts that just how it is.Overall its pretty good on my part i've read mind numbingly chinese novels which span for atleaset 2000+ ch and this seems childs play in comparison.Oh I do have to point out a review that I 've read which is quite frankly made by a pe*o or somethin that 'Kuro Alicia' complains on the story not having Romance despite having the tag, what a buffoon I mean they're kids!!! 7 years old at best! Hormones haven't kicked it yet and despite the MC having been reincarnated well he doesn't know a thing a about romance (ehich he clearly stated) and what are you going on about not them having s*x?! Are you s*upid? I'll say it again THEY'RE KIDS!!! My god if you're that h**ny then go find some r18 novels. I can't believe the first reviee I got to see is yours