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Great story! I hesitated to read it due to the description which screamed Mary-Sue incoming.But it's worth the read. Lets just say some basic facts...The MC is a Mary-Sue.By which I mean a "OP Character with almost no weaknesses/challenges in the story." But she's a well-written Mary-Sue. But she's at least upfront about being a Mary Sue, there's no coy "oh no, I'm so helpless but oh wait? I kicked your ass." There's no being pushed around until surprise, surprise, I'm a powerhouse.She starts off as a powerhouse. She knows she's a powerhouse. And she doesn't pretend to be otherwise. If anything her primary development is character-wise.The story writes the character's developments well. Vibrant personalities outside (most of) the villains, who do come off a ltitle flat.If you come in the story with the mindset "this is a comedic take" and you'll enjoy the story far more than a serious dark and gritty take on the era.