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Inconsistent, shallow, and illogical.I've tried to like it, but I'm fed up after 50+ chapters of nonsense drama and more and more inconsistencies.Spoiler
MC knows that his ex is going to kill him, he knows another guy is going to kill someone who's now his friend.
He's pretty sure the ex is reborn as well, so knows what's going to happen and use it to his advantage.
Instead of getting rid of these people, he does absolutely nothing.
Instead of distancing himself from them, he fights in the same army, stays in the same place as them, just to keep the drama going.
[collapse]It's incredibly cheap, uninspired, and frustrating to read.Then there are other, smaller things that add to it, like the writer forgetting that beastmen can't talk in their animal form, some instances of clothes materialising out of thin air, etc.It's overall just VERY slopy writing.Characterisation is flat as well, shallow, and most characters are utterly braindead.Again, it's cheap melodrama and cliché "poor MC is hated by his evil family", just that it's very overdone even for this trope.MC/ML and friends are super OP, they could easily survive on their own yet decide to take risks and mix with others.I hoped especially the "villains" would get some depth but it's the opposite, they get progressively more one-dimensional.A good antagonist isn't one the writer stuffed with every negative trait they could think of and make them behave in the most despicable ways possible to force the reader to hate them.But that's the case with every antagonist in this novel, they are pure evil just to be evil and the main villain's motivation is too shallow and illogical to be of value.He could archive what he wants completely without entangling MC, yet it has to be MC for... no logical reason.None of the characters seem to use their brain, it's so obvious that everything happens just because the writer wanted it to happen and not because it makes actual sense.I don't see any way to finish over 200 chapters of what's basically the writer's pre-planned beats loosely tied together by fillers.But if you like OP beastmen fighting baddies and don't care about anything else, then it isn't worse than similar novels.