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Hello everyone!I'm here to give my opinion after reading 16 chapters. I love the concept. I think that MC beggining decisions are bad.I do not think tho that this is bad for the story. What I think is that MC is a little too obssesed with ML. I think that she should also have other things that she likes to do except trying to go out with him or help original heroine. Does she have any hobby? Or is she even interested in what will happen to people under her incompatent father? I think she would care. Why not describe a way that she helps or will help to improve quality of their lives? Also I would appricieate more interesting side characters and maybe more deep description of politics?Maybe decribe her lessons to become a heir how is she doing there? What issues did her father create in the territory? There is too much thinkin about ML, it kinda scares me, and no descriptions of other things I'm interested in.But im only 16 chapters in if I read more and smth changes I will update.