- #1
While as a whole I loved this one there were quite few issues, The Good:
- Liked Protagonist, he wasn't emotionless husk, had emotions and yet was still very pragmatic.
- The twists and reveals very genuinely amazing and I didn't see them coming,
- Most characters had some dimension to them and weren't just "Young Masters" Copy pasted over and over again.
- It's very slow, especially at the start,
- Too much "Bad luck" a.k.a bad stuff randomly happening all the time
- There were so much padding, whole chapters of "I should" "No I shouldn't" inner monologue, don't get me wrong the inner struggle is okay with me but you don't need to repeat it over and over and over again its very Redundant.
- There was too much info repeated, giving us same information copy pasted multiple times
- While the ending was great it was dragged for way too long, we got few "life recaps" and even same story retold from different POVS with very little added to it, then we got AGAIN same story retold from another POV with too much same useless stuff being told to us AGAIN, and then we got protagonist flashback over what happened in this volume but wait then we got a speech and protagonist told about, WHAT HAPPENED IN THIS VOLUME. FFS how many times does an author need to tell us what happened
- And lastly a minor issue At the end of vol1. Spoiler
MC gets a way to kill beings that are pretty much the strongest beings in the world which was a very convenient and cheap way for author to solve one of the issues. And I also wonder how the author is either going to nerf it or prevent MC from ever being challanged
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