He Became the Only Ally of the Abandoned Warrior Chapter -- Discussion

  • Thread starter Mel2121
  • Start date
  • #1
I've been enjoying every chapter so far, I'm a bit disappointed in the harem plot overtaking the main hero and her dependency. Although I can say the earlier chapters are a great hook and the recent chapters seem to be course-correcting to having main heroine be the main deranged gril.

Also, be wary of lots of grammar errors and mistakes (gender changes) here and there.
 
You must be logged in to reply here. Register an account to get started.