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So far the story is actually interesting, however there is too much naration from third party and less an actual situational scene, which can make a reader be immerse more in the story by guessing the whole situation. Idk if the author purposely set it this way for the opening and will make a detail scene on the important part only, but definitely it became a set back for me personally. I didn't like being feeded like that ðŸ˜As for the plot itself is truly interesting, while for the character, as I couldn't still grasped their personalities from my perspective I didn't hold any deep attachment to any of them, even the MC.The author set her as a capable person and make a steel bridges for her to survive, Soo... Yeah, that's it.Well It's just an opinion after all, people might find it different and like the story being write like this more. But I did recomend it, it's nice one.