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Ok, this story is angst. When it starts out it feels a lot like “how to get my husband on my side” a shitty family, sold to a family that hates her - much worse though. Creepy obsessive brother. But FL doesn’t have coping mechanisms. Instead lots of horrible depression and shrinking into herself. Then revelation and revenge.ML is not excusable. He is not a bad person except to FL which makes it worse. Even when he is “good” to her he isn’t respectful, he doesn’t listen, crosses boundaries. But revenge is sweet and the story is really well written. All the people feel real.I want them both to forget each other entirely and her to go with second ML. They would be both better off just forgetting the last 2 years.
