I Have Become A Demon God. Did You Just Ask Me To Be A Minor Villain? Chapter 10 Discussion

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  • #1
Badly written, no sense of continuity, no personality in characters, lacks scale of the world (nothing about world is explained), 4 out of 10.

If you love making assumptions while reading, then you will love this novel, because the author sure doesn't explain anything at all. In one of the starting scenes, when he first gets the system initialization and realizes that 'protagonists' and 'villains' exist and that a 'protagonist' is nearby, he commands his subordinate (about which you know nothing except shes a succubus) to go find the protagonist. He never told her what the hell a 'protagonist' is. And yet she's like OK and disappears. Also instantly finds the guy. Continuity much? Also the MC is already exceptionally strong but none of it is explained like how strong or how well connected, you're just supposed to assume every girl on the planet already loves him in that duration of 20 years he spent becoming a demon god. Which it was mentioned he spent 10 years just training in the abyss.

His personality itself is also nonexistent. Just like every other 'protagonist' he faces which all literally have the protagonist syndrome and consider themselves the most unique snowflake in the multiverse. The author can't even stop jerking himself off enough to clarify what the setting even is. Are these guys transmigrators or time travellers? Cause its mentioned they have a time traveller's pride or a regressor but it doesn't make any sense.

Speaking of time, there is none like I already mentioned. 50 kilometers can be travelled in half a day apparently on carriage. Not that any bit of time passage is ever mentioned, its like everything happens simultaneously and instantly, there is no passage of days depicted in the writing, but its implied that its been weeks which doesnt make sense logic wise.

Anyways I dropped this novel at chapter 10.
 
  • #2
Good. The story line is predictable. The redeeming factor is the realistic portrayal of the characters. The end is hanging not a conclusion to a good story
 
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