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I feel like this author hasn't been in a relationship before? Or maybe there is a huge resistance to making this story so dark? But if you we were treated how the MC was treated in the past AND currently, would you be this open? MC is constantly viewed and treated like an object. They're basically told "It is what it is" by their previous companions and basically has Stockholm Syndrome for the entirety of the story. The only character that even remotely values the MC will never have a shot so as the reader you are stuck reading a predictable development. Every character is so selfish and the MC basically has to acquiesce to the point of wanting to achieve their desires or everything is gg. This a very poor writing of a reluctant hero, because they were never written to be reluctant in the first place.
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