- #1
Man would I love if it the author took more time to introduce the world to us and flesh things out. But as it is now it just feels like things are the way they are just cause plot.As another review said, who knows why blacksmithing is so rare in his world cause we sure don't. We're supposed to just go along with it and that's how the rest of the chapters I've read have felt too. Overall, it just feels like a mellowed down version of Overgeared—minus the terrible writing at the start but also minus the satisfying growth that you see both Grid and the Author have.
