- #1
The author cannot stop themselves from expositing between every thought and action of characters. In the middle of a fight scene, the author will then go off on explaining the background of a character, their thoughts about how the fight is going, and whatever else the author thinks are relevant. The only redeeming part is reading about how the main character reacts to living as a game character in a world of martial arts, also known as Murim. She is really fast to resorting to violence, and these situations will most likely become stale the further I read. I do not recommend reading this if readers cannot withstand having to push through heavy exposition in-between actions. Edit: I have read a little further, and the story seems to differ little from what I have wrote previously. There is a lot of writing for little to no payoff. Truly, the word count is king for paying bills.