After Becoming the Stand-in for the White Moonlight Chapter 267 Discussion

Overall, it's pretty good. The MC is interesting, and I love how she's written. A lot of the side characters are also pretty well written, though the amount makes it hard to keep track of who's who. It's also very interesting to see how the world's original MC, Mu Xiaoxiao, progresses and slowly blackens. The only thing about the story is that things happen way to suddenly. Like

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on chapter 267, she randomly looses her memory and ends up in some random desert with some random people and it seems like there's been a time skip of at least a few years? The chapter right before it, 266, she basically reached the height of her life at that point, and bam, the next chapter it's like she's back to square one.

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Another thing is that although the translation of this isn't the worst I've read, it also doesn't help with clarity because it's hard to tell if a random development is actually supposed to be like that, or it was due to a typo that made it seem weird. For example, I thought Miaofa was a woman for the longest of times because the pronouns kept switching around. Confusing descriptions about his chest didn't help either.