The End of the World Chapter 6 part2 Discussion

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The start was deep and interesting and it's well translated (content seems too complicated for MTL, I guess). Little weakness : too slow ? Not really interesting ?

Something bothers me: I usually feel very excited, especially with the first chapters but not this time. The ML is akward and his behavior not really realistic enough (even for a novel, it lacks substance). I am dropping out because there is so many great novels out there.
 
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