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It's mentioned he did the paperwork and is no longer part of the duke's family so he basically got kidnapped and sent to this death.
The duke kept bragging about it too yet there are zero repercussions for it.
Legally speaking he kidnapped a man, sent him to his death and told everyone about it. It's all dumb as hell
[collapse]-1 star for the woman wanting to beeline into his pantsSpoilerFalling in love the same day they meet is so common already I don't even care anymore.
What I do care about is someone she has literally never seen nor heard of before but want to get it on is completely ridiculous.
[collapse]-2 stars for "alchemy"SpoilerBiggest offender by far.
For all the world shattering items he makes and the supposed emphasis on item creation the author instead decides to skip the process entirely.
He says he needs materials but never specifies them so instead it seems like he just grabs random crap and instantly materializes objects into existence.
It's like going into the living room and making a nuclear submarine.
[collapse]+1 star for translator's effort