- #1
This is a juvenile novel.The characters wear their feelings on their sleeves, telling us how they're feeling all the time and being melodramatic. And while I've read and even liked some 'fluff' stories, here you can feel the cringe since it's so forced and quick to happen.The dialogue is repetitive and wasteful. There's an absurd amount of written content dedicated to pleasantries and formal/casual speech or how said character should be addressed.The women all behave the same and are shallow cardboard waifus who fall in love with the MC at the same chapter they meet, for no reason or simply for being indebted to him because the were given a magical item.His powers are not explained and he can just create whatever item he wants at any time with minimal effort and materials, so don't except any challenge/tension. He's also the dense doormat kind of JP MC we all know (and hate).Plot consists of the usual formula: Unreasonable exile because MC didn't have attack magic/class + he being immediately successful in the new place and girls throwing themselves at him for no reason + people who banished him being in trouble because the MC was too important but no one realized. It neither brings something new nor does the old well as the aforementioned problems.I tend to be forgiving with Japanese fantasy novels like this, but this one is doesn't do anything right.