The Creation Alchemist Enjoys Freedom -If I Am Exiled From My Hometown, I Can Make Magic Items With Transcendent Effects at the Knees of the Demon Lord- Chapter 10 Discussion

Real bad imo. The start was good, MC really had a genuine reason to hate his family, especially his father, and the empire. But how it proceeds after that wnt downhill. One, his skill suddenly being upgraded for no apparent reason. Sure, it explains that how, spoilers:

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He basically got an upgrade just from entering the Demon part of the continent because the place has abundant dark energy. It's not that he consciously does it, but no. Its automatic. In most novels people have elemental affinities. And even if they do, they first need to manually take a certain element in, accumulate and raise its size pool, then balance things out since he apparently also has opposing elements in his body. The guy wanted to make something and his skill informs that he lacks dark energy, which he suddenly gets after the Demon lord went near him. He just fking absorbed someone else's magic power without any input or permission, subconsciously, and without any repercussions such as the Demon Lord suddenly losing magic power or realizing the MC was absorbing any dark energy. Note that this is the Demon Lord, said to be the Strongest of the Demon race.

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The biggest red flag would be that after upgrading, the skill becomes broken. And author used the most lazy approach, creating something from nothing. It says it uses magic power, but how much is not specified. He can create materials of unknown origin or specifications and create stuff that contains principle he doesnt have a full understanding of. This novel is literally the phrase "It just works" novelized.

Characters also doesnt really have any personality. Or rather decent ones. The only consistent one ten chapters in would just be his strength obsessed father. Maid is not even naive, she is just there for there to be a plot device. To convince the Demon lord for the MC. Falls in love just for the simple thing of MC helping to fix her necklace. Demon Lord is young, but also has no personality. Accepts whatever reason the maid gives her in regards to the MC. MC also dumb since his reasons for keeping things a secret is soooooooo fcking dumb.

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so like he kept the secret that the envoys the empire sends to the Demon continent every few years are actually deemed sacrifices by the empire. Sent there to fulfill the peace treaty and to die, cause their impressions of demons are uncivilized monsters who hates and kills humans. MC for some reason after finding out that the Demon side was real chill decides to keep this a secret because he fears that he will get treated badly. HIM. A guy who can create sh*t from nothing, can recreate technology and weapons from the summoned heroes world.

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All in all, not even that good of a time killer. You'd just lose brain cells reading this. But if you have time to kill, nothing better to read, or just want a bulldozing MC story, go ahead. Enjoy.