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For example, when the ML brings the MC to the royal blanket, he's glowering, constantly acting like a scum gong in QT novels.
ML: don't embarrass me or I'll rip you to shreds!
Mc:proceeds to eat a ton of food
Royal family: mocks MC making ML angry
Uh, buddy, if you didn't want to be embarrassed then you should have stayed with the MC instead of stalking off and acting like a c*cky peacock.
Plus, the ML knows the MC is a bit unique because he watched the video of the MC going out to eat with his ex crush.
Isn't the ML just shooting his own foot running off and leaving the MC alone at the banquet?
And then he has the nerve to gripe about the MC calling the ML's crush a boy toy (even though he clearly is) after insulting the Mc's ex crush
[collapse]It's so inconsistent that I can't take anything or anyone seriously because they're just quarreling with each other.And I don't really feel bad for their issues because there are so many solutions.For instance, if the MC is struggling with money, couldn't he just disguise himself with his make up skills and go off and make money with the skills from his last life? SpoilerAnd I'm not talking about potion making, I'm talking about his piano ECT. If hed better than that Lin guy, the number one piano player or whatever, then he'd certainly make some cash
[collapse]Also, Wouldn't it make sense to have multiple identities?And the flow. My god the flow. It's not the best. There's no center focus at all. I can't even give an example because there was so many things happening then BOOM, MC and ML are married.Because of this, the characters seem one dimensional despite the overload of information on them explaining why they act like they do.It makes them seem brainless too.Compared to other novels with similar premises and comedic antics, this one falls extremely short.For example, The rebirth Waste Strikes Back novel delievers this similar premises in a much more sophisticated manner that was actually funny.I'd recommend reading that and comparing it to this to make your own judgements.Adieu.2/10