Teisou Gyakuten Sekai no Doutei Henkyou Ryoushu Kishi Chapter 25 Discussion

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And yet another story that can’t let go of the “isekai” tag, while all it accomplishes is to force the reader into the mindset of a Japanese virg*n 14 year old boy with a big b**bs fetish...

But well, let’s see what else this WN has to offer.

First and foremost: POV changes.

Seriously, given the amount of POV changes, I’d have suggested the author just tell the story 3rd person instead. I believe in the first 10 chapters alone we entered 6 or more different POVs. As a rule of thumb, you can probably assume that every character that gets a name, no matter how minor, also has his/her own POV parts.

Otherwise, it’s your typical medieval fantasy focused on politics, conflicts, royalty etc, with some gory scenes in between. And can’t forget the cliché comedy elements, mostly boiling down to the MC’s painful erections and stale innuendos.

The setting could have been interesting, but struggles under the missing maturity of its cast.

Spoiler

If I had to judge it, probably the ~9 year old girl the MC takes as an apprentice is the most mature acting character in this story so far.

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In conclusion:

This is just another average story unable to part with the ever typical WN clichés. Something you can read if you are bored out of your mind with nothing else to do.

Otherwise, nothing you’ll miss out on if you don’t.
 
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