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I love the story line so far, but there is a few issues. Somewhere around chapter 25 it seems to skip a chapter, the ending of the instance is not referenced or written out. Some times it seems that there are scenes missing, I can’t blame the author or the translator because I do not know Chinese and I haven’t read any of the raws. The translation is easy to read which Is wonderful because it helps me enjoy the story even more.The relationship between MC and who I think ML is slightly confusing because I can’t tell if the ML is in love with MC yet or not, and if he is then why become love rivals with the one you like? Mc’s job is randomly brought up in one sentence but the way it is written seems to think the readers already know what it is so it had confused me slightly, but I am still only read a small portion of the story and it could be brought up over the course of the story!I really like MC and how he is written so I will continue to read this and hopefully the story will continue to entertain me! Maybe in the future I’ll write a higher review!The arcs are unique and refreshing compared to some other’s in this genre, they are not too drawn out or long so it is easy to remember everything. The fourth arc is interesting, I love how the readers don’t even know who is who and are as clueless as the characters.Third arc is also wonderful, the idea of it is a masterpiece. I was as puzzled as the MC until he started piecing it together. I wish it had a little more impact on him but he seems to be a very calm and collected person so I understand why it didn’t effect him much.There is a love triangle but it is very unrequited and the one they are after seems like a interesting character but isn’t a big part of the novel so far (they both know it is not requited, why they know I won’t say but if you don’t want to read because of the love triangle don’t worry.) I’ll edit this review when I finish the rest of the story but so far none of the cons have got me to drop it, every story has cons so I hope people will give this one a try to see if it interests them as much as it does to me!