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The writing isn't just "kind of juvenile, " it's ridiculously juvenile. I suspect the author is a chunnibyou and has read too many of those "The Domineering Fifth Lady Reincarnates and Becomes The Master Beast Tamer Who Astonishes The World"!Basically, childish actions are praised as rare and extraordinary and everyone goes "WOW!"For example, in the first few chapters, Spoiler
MC and her siblings are going to be sent to another planet for the family clan trial, and when she asks the butler where she's going, he goes "WOW HOLY CRAP WE GOT A RARE GENIUS HERE NONE OF THE OTHER SIBLINGS EVEN ASKED THIS QUESTION! SHE MUST BE SUPER SMART!!!"
[collapse]...????? I don't quite understand what is genius and what is smart... isn't this common sense?MC also has a temper that flies off at the drop of a hat, which might make sense in her original world as a "Divine Doctor, " but this is a completely new world where she has no background. I don't understand how a grown adult can act so childish and temperamental (she's 20 before she transmigrates) without being the least bit cautious. Moreover, this behavior is considered unique and extraordinary!I really did try to power through and see if I'd like it more later, but unfortunately, I simply cannot stand this writing and I'm dropping this here. I wish the rest of you good luck!