- #1
Not recommended. The story and writing style were very amateurish and shallow. It’s like a tween wrote it... some scenes were forced; some were childish with overly dramatic reactions. The writing flow was very disjointed— I was reading the words and the sentences, I understood each of the words, but the ideas they were supposed to convey were difficult to comprehend. It’s like I had dyslexia or something. My brain wasn’t processing the words/sentences properly and I usually have good reading comprehension. It’s a short story, but it felt like forever trying to read through to the end. It’s my first time giving a two star rating. This is specially unusual for me ‘coz I love school-life stories. 😢
