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The part where they almost made me drop it was when that uncle jaeng guy or whatever his name was started talking about MC's brother. Nobody gives a f*ck about the brother and it wasn't mentioned in the original plot so it should stay that way. This dumbf*ck of an author tries adding ideas in that are unnecessary. From my viewpoint, this is just a way of using his brother as a scapegoat so to justify the og villian mc's actions. It was so extra I don't understand, it's not like this arc will make MC develop.
[collapse]Oh and the inconsistency.. One day the main character is angry, strong, stubborn, powerful and the next he's the most vulnerable pig you'll see.SpoilerAlso we do get a chapter refreshing back to his life on earth. I believe the author added elements of what they've experienced and it was executed terribly. I think the author tried making this emotional or whatever but I just found it a nuisance. Yayaya he sacraficed his education and his family forced him to do labor for them blah blah, I get it. But this flashback is so random and it dates back to when he was 19. It has nothing to do with the present him, the past is the past, another extra author added for no reason. You could argue it was to let us see a speck of MC back on earth, but it was a terrible execution and a moment that was not at all emotional. And of all the possible interesting moments, author added the least interesting idea I've ever come across in my entire life.
[collapse]Do not read this unless you want to read a mediocre story written by someone who had a lobotomy constructed by an ostrich. That is my best advice and warning.Overall 1.5/5