_spark_382 February 19,2025 #1 The story starts off well with the protag and her lovable pet. It eventually stalls and gets bogged down in a circular plot that progresses an inch each chapter. The essence and charm of the story is lost and becomes a boring slog. Reply
The story starts off well with the protag and her lovable pet. It eventually stalls and gets bogged down in a circular plot that progresses an inch each chapter. The essence and charm of the story is lost and becomes a boring slog.
