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This story has a nice flow, and decent characters. Even the premise is not entirely bad (reforming the country into one that is better) However the obvious intelligence of the author is apparent (or lack there of) What I mean is that the whole, 'Present day government is better' mentality that plagues the Asians more than most. Democracy, Communism, and also Dictatorships all share the same thing in common. They are con artists dreams, and have the fatal flaw of centralized power. I would hope that this story has the current decentralization of nobles along with that gathering of theirs a little more light of how amazing decentralization truly is when it comes to power hungry and mad people. Like the queen of that other country.The King also seems to be a ret*rd, so much so, that I am amazed that he has not been directly manipulated yet.Outside those major gripes I have little ones here and there, but they can be tossed aside due to story reasons. However unless they address these two key aspects it will always be looked at as an inferior work, and a collage of present day ideals in a failed application. The only thing that has not made me say this is a socialist work, is the fact they have not commented on any collective or well-fare systems for the lower classes (at the expense of the upper ones always)