Pick Up the Rejected Pure Love Chapter 54 Discussion

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It was fun, cute, heartwarming and likable characters.. The character interaction between Protagonist, Heroine and Side Characters is pretty good and quite funny. The MC is pretty straight forward kind of guy he knows what he wants and needs to do. Japanese author should learn a bit here when writing their MCs.

But not everything in this story is great, the author doesn't know how to make the story interesting, it's pure boring vanilla that's all about MC & FL saying sweet nothings to each other. No plot and author doesn't seem to know how to progress properly. It only fun at the beginning but it gets boring after a while, there's basically no plot at all, there's not much interesting to see because it's all about MC and FL flirting with each other, eating, studying, dating and repeat. Around chapter 50 all these things just keeps going on circles and nothing interesting happening at all. There are parts that kind of cringe, when MC keeps getting embarrassed and blushing like a teenager despite being an adult inside. Tbh MC is kind of cool at first but when author made MC act like a blushing hormonal teenage boy, it ruins his character for me. There's no problems or challenges that need to be solved by our Main Characters so author just keep writing boring and repeated flirting between them. It would've been better if author insert some business intrigues, interesting side characters or insert some minor drama and twists but there's nothing like that. This story is all sunshine and rainbows, pure 100% romance without any toppings and this is what makes this a boring and chore to read because there's nothing interesting to expect at all. Read this if you just want to read wholesome flirting betwen MC & FL. But if you're expecting some minor drama and good plot then you'll be disappointed. Plot: 1/5

Characters: 3.5/5
 
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