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I don't know why people are saying this story is badly written. IT'S NOT BADLY WRITTEN!! YOU JUST CAN'T APPRECIATE IT YOU PHILISTINES!!I mean there are parts of the story that is not well written, especially the first volume is very rough, and the MC's thoughts, changing personality and adaptation to her new body need to be better explained in the form or more monologue. The first and parts of the 2nd volume could also do with a few more chapters to expand things a bit more as it seems to progress through a little too quickly in places.Overall however, excellent story setting and world building, interesting and adorable MC with a complex backstory that you want to continuously root for, great side-characters, good humour, strong plot and all round good read!
