Rebirth After Divorce Chapter 8 Discussion

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I read the one translated chapter and it looked good, so I went to read the raws. Oh boy, I shouldn't have done that. The author's writing style is so annoying! The author writes like this~~~ every couple paragraphs~~~ sometimes in multiple sentences~~~

Then at the end of a certain chapter the author complains about how the MC's name made it impossible for his nickname to not sound girly. Like the way the MC and his cousin have been talking wasn't absolutely girly this whole time too?

After being reborn, I thought the MC would just take his mom and get out of that hellhole ASAP, but nope. The misery drags. But what really made me want to drop this was

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When MC was reborn to the past, he woke up in the hospital because he went back to when he was 10 and one of his cousins pushed him into a lake in November and he couldn't swim. His mother saved him and he had to be hospitalized for over a week. Their family is poor because only his mother works and his father gambles away all of the money the mother earns. The father almost even took away the money the mother was going to use to pay the hospital for MC's treatment, but the mom ran away before he could take it. Not surprisingly, the father regularly beats the mom. MC wants to grow up quickly and be strong to protect his mother.

With that in mind, when the MC finally goes back to school, during lunch his friend asks him for the meat in his lunchbox and the MC just gives it to him! ALL OF IT! He didn't even just give him a piece or half of it. The MC just out right gave him the whole thing. Yes, I understand MC really loves his friends, but come on! MC's family can't afford good food. I'm pretty sure the mother gave away her portion or made other sacrifices in order to be able to afford a small amount of meat to give to MC to eat, but not only did MC not think about that, he didn't even think that he should eat properly in order to grow stronger. He was still weak from his trip to the hospital. On top of that, the friend's family are comfortable enough to eat as much meat as they want, except the friend once overate and got the runs, so the friend's mother became more strict about the amount of meat the friend eats. Why is MC giving away his food to someone who doesn't need it??? It's understandable that the friend doesn't know any better because he's a 10yo kid and he just wants to eat what he wants to eat, but the MC is a 30+yo soul! He should know better than to give away the food his mother worked so hard to prepare for him!

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That pissed me off so much. That plus a bunch of inconsistencies and so many grammar and spelling errors in the story and all the s*upid ~~~~. I'm done. I've never seen such a s*upid way of writing in my life.
 
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